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Comic 31 - Too Easy?!?

23rd Nov 2013, 11:18 AM in The Good The Bad and the Beautiful
Too Easy?!?
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CrazySOB42 25th Nov 2013, 7:54 AM edit delete reply
CrazySOB42
No offense, but it kind of seems like you put a little too much enthusiasm in the their speech. My suggestion would be that they trail off in thought more...
JMRonk 26th Nov 2013, 8:16 AM edit delete reply
JMRonk
I actually looked at that this week... I don't think it is the speech, but the font size. In the next few pages I actually experimented with the speech bubbles and this week (which comes out in December) I shrank the font.... The smaller font made a world of difference!
CrazySOB42 26th Nov 2013, 1:40 PM edit delete reply
CrazySOB42
Nice, I can hardly wait to read them.
JMRonk 26th Nov 2013, 1:42 PM edit delete reply
JMRonk
I also felt the storyline was straying a bit and the comic expanding too fast... So I am pulling back to the two main characters (Sha'Do and Bishop)the give them more depth before carrying on with the other characters!
CrazySOB42 26th Nov 2013, 1:47 PM edit delete reply
CrazySOB42
That's a great idea! :D